Prisoner of my mind

September 4th, 2006 by

I stand here before you
a soldier in battle with my mind
hurting in pain, pleading for my life,
yet again, time after time.

Don’t pity my sorry state
when you see me wounded and sore
Just know that I am brave
but to tell you the truth, I can fight no more.

Let me go,
I want travel to yonder land
Far from this fighting
and wars created through time.

Forever searching for a loved lost dream
I long to live and breathe free
to be liberated from these chains of misery
I yearn to follow my own destiny

© Shibani

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14 Responses to “Prisoner of my mind”

  1. on 05 Sep 2006 at 4:58 am1 TuhinNo Gravatar

    Beautifully written….a great poet in the making huh 🙂

    Life is a battlfield..wherevr u go u hav 2 be prepared for the fight and i know you are brave enuf to face any scuffle…yes,evn if u wana travel to ‘yonderland’. But winning the war on the way to your destiny will make you a great warrior.

    Keep Rocking 🙂

  2. on 05 Sep 2006 at 5:53 am2 ManishaNo Gravatar

    Very well written, It seems like you have been hurt by someone. The words you have used in the poem is expressing the feelings of your heart.

  3. on 05 Sep 2006 at 6:59 am3 SohailNo Gravatar

    Hmm.. that was kool…..

    The oddesy of soul caught in the trap of body and supported by consious mind….

    life itself is battlefield
    “who know when this battle will end”

    No matter how far i go…
    no matter how far i see….
    no matter how far i be…
    this will go on and on.

    life is full of questions,
    life is full of desires,
    life is full of lies,
    life is full of vibes,
    this will go on and on.

    ………………………………………
    Well written Doveye….
    keep coming up…

    Conscience is the greatest gift…
    and patience is virtue!

    -Sohail

  4. on 05 Sep 2006 at 5:19 pm4 DeepNo Gravatar

    very well written and I always say and believe in.. if something bad happens to you, the motive behind is, something good which will be cover the effects of that bad thing… so we just have to stand like a brave soldier and fight with the wind of bad things because there is always tornado good things following it…

  5. on 06 Sep 2006 at 5:38 am5 AkashNo Gravatar

    Just 1 word…beautiful!

  6. on 07 Sep 2006 at 6:05 pm6 AvineshNo Gravatar

    Well-written, Shibs. There are times when everyone wants to break free of life, but you have to remain strong and carry on. Put on a smile, forget about the past and begin a new journey. Take a walk and enjoy the ambient atmosphere, go hiking with friends or read a book. Most of all, be happy 🙂

  7. on 10 Sep 2006 at 7:16 am7 roshanNo Gravatar

    loved the blog..am adding it to my blogroll.

  8. on 13 Sep 2006 at 4:24 am8 ShibaniNo Gravatar

    Na, just one of those days when I feel I want to know the reason of this life – a wish to just fly away, liberated from living and free 🙂

  9. on 28 Sep 2006 at 5:26 pm9 gladiatorrNo Gravatar

    ammmazing…………jeeeeeeeeez, i wanna learn writin like dat tooo ah! ;P …rock on!

  10. on 28 Sep 2006 at 6:27 pm10 ShibaniNo Gravatar

    Thanx, gladiator 🙂

  11. on 06 May 2009 at 7:05 pm11 dypelear

    nice! i’m gonna make my own blog

  12. on 19 May 2009 at 11:29 pm12 ShibaniNo Gravatar

    Good Luck, dear 🙂

  13. on 11 Sep 2009 at 2:40 am13 NitinNo Gravatar

    At times i kinda want to hide somewhere… Alas, there is no place to hide… I just felt this piece…

  14. on 13 Sep 2009 at 9:18 pm14 ShibaniNo Gravatar

    Nitin,

    We all go through such emotions…when you want hide from ourselves and hate being vulnerable.

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